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General anniversary
What is anniversary generally? It is a yearly happening for some past celebration that has occurred like a wedding or yes even a funeral sad to say when some would say it is the anniversary of losing a particular family member, but it is more of re-celebrating an occasion usually the wedding.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Easter acrostic
What is the season of Easter? To me it is the season of wishes and hopes for all times. We all know that this holiday is about they Lord Jesus and what he did for us. It is also a day of fun for the very young child and visions of the Easter bunny hiding decorated eggs and hiding baskets with all sort of goodies inside, but
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Happy Easter!
Dear Creators: Just wanting to wish everyone a Very Happy Easter! He is Risen! To all the children out the Easter Bunny has, hopefully, delivered Easter baskets to all filled with all sorts of good stuff. Easter is also a time to reflect and pray. Again, He is risen for us all!
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Capitalism
This is a new series for me which by the title of this one will be known as 'Economics Acrostics'. What is economics? We have at one time or another have studied the basics of this subject in high school and some have moved on to major in this area in college and graduate school and have it become their profession and now call themselves 'economists'. This first acrostic is titled 'Capitalism'.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Creation, Exodus, and Adam and Eve. Content Warning.
In these critiques using 'The Book of Mormon' and starting from the beginning there were points that reminded me of the Creation as well as the Exodus story as we know the families go into the Wilderness. In Chapter Six of 'Nephi' "Therefore let us go; let us be strong like unto Moses", and I am thinking this is the same Moses that I learned about. "After he truly spake unto the waters of the Red Sea and they divided hither and thither, and our fathers came out of captivity, and on dry ground, and the armies of Pharaoh did follow and did drown in the waters of the Red Sea."
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
The Soldier Ran Away
Here is another critique of a short story entitled 'The Soldier Ran Away' written by Kay Boyle. This is the story of a boy named Jeff Wheeler the son of an Army colonel who spends a lot of time on his hobby in his attic workshop. One night in doing his work Jeff begins noticing things about his work that he has not done and a few days later he discovers why and he begins to help a very young soldier who went AWOL and has a decision to make as well as Jeff does- on whether to share about the soldier to his father. The illustrations in this story are colorful and adds much to the story.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Del
Another writing project that I am working on is a series of critiques of short stories and other writings that I have read in many of my old Literature textbooks that I had in high school and I found at Amazon and eBay. The first critique is about a short story entitled 'Del' written by Karl Harshbarger and it is about a boy named Del who is working in a labor camp and Del just wants to experience life and when he hears a train rolling by he remembers where he comes from and home. Karl use of language of how one young man uses the conversation to learn about each other and their situations. At times it seems that Del's wanderlust while listening to the train brings back many memories for him. The illustrations of the story does depict what Del is feeling throughout the story.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
