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The Last Bite

For Paul and John's 47-Words Short Story Unofficial Challenge.

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 13 days ago 1 min read
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Dad brought home extra meat and said it was cheap. It tasted fine, just sweeter than usual. A week later, missing posters went up. Last night, I found a fingernail in my steak. I heard footsteps upstairs, and he whispered, “Did you finish everything on your plate?”

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

I’m a firm believer life is messy, beautiful, and too short, which is why I write poems full of heart and humor. I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. My book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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  • Antoni De'Leon10 days ago

    Geez, is he planning to do him like Hansel and Gretel. That's messed up. Love it.

  • John Cox11 days ago

    Tasted like chicken. Thanks for joining the fun, Tim!

  • Lana V Lynx12 days ago

    Oh, what short horror is this? Great story, Tim.

  • Susan Fourtané 12 days ago

    Ohhh this reminded me of that German guy who later on in prison became a vegetarian ... after his previous eating habits. The finger nail was a nice detail. :D

  • Shirley Belk12 days ago

    At the corner of horrifying and nauseating (spitting out fingernails as I type)

  • Tiffany Gordon13 days ago

    WOW! Well done Tim!

  • perfect

  • Mariann Carroll13 days ago

    Oh may! I would start throwing up. Awesome, entry to the Challenge.

  • Sara Wilson13 days ago

    😱😱😱

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