On the trampoline,
I told him, βCapture me in cloudsββ
bubble pops mid-air.
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When Iβm not lost in my own plots, Iβm either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging lifeΒ withΒ aΒ grin.
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Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (13)
βCapture me in cloudsβ -Love that image paired with the last line!
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This is good
This takes me back to childhood.
I love the whimsy and joy in your haiku! Well made, lovely Komal
This is so playful :-)
My brain is trying to unpack this π Trampoline- fun " capture me in the clouds"- whimsical but the bubble popping - usually a reality check So it's a thought-provoker for sure, a wee mystery...π€ Great job on this Haiku! πβοΈβ€οΈ
So there's a lot to unpack here lol my brain says " trampoline- fun" , "catch me in the clouds"- bouncing high fun and then the "bubble pops mid-air" is the bubble bursting, usually not fun. A wee mystery and thought-provoking riddling... π€ we need a sequel! ππΌβοΈβοΈπ
Wow π€© Brilliant
playful haiku an allusion to something more
Supercute stuff Koko!
I appreciate how many questions this haiku begs! :) Great job!
Did he catch you ? I love this playful Haiku poem, Komal. π₯°