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A Sensational II Challenge Poem

By Cindy CalderPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Sandro Botticelli, The Birth of Venus (courtesy of WikiImages on Pixabay)

The whispers of echoed silence derived in wondrous delight,

Amidst the prevailing, crisp smell of creative brilliance so right,

Pearlescent colors sustain and reflect streams of bright light

Rippling along altruistic anatomical undulations as they ignite

The pungent taste of a manifested dream sprung forth to life.

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About the Creator

Cindy Calder

From Charleston SC - "I am still learning." Michelangelo

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  • Test2 years ago

    Cindy... you are killing it with this sensational challenge!! I love the way your descriptive language pulls us in and is complimented well with your rhyme scheme!! Seriously showing off some skills here!

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    This is stunning, Cindy!! A masterpiece!!

  • Gabriel Huizenga2 years ago

    Absolutely gorgeous work - so many wonderful words, woven together into a striking, fully sensational scene! This is such a fantastic celebration of artistry :)

  • Silver Daux2 years ago

    The word choice was spectacular. What a delight to read!

  • Gerard DiLeo2 years ago

    Great imagery, an ekphrastic little pearl, Cindy. Dream girl.

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    To me this is a great description of the image chosen 'Venus on the half shell'.

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is beautiful, Cindy. Well done.

  • Lana V Lynx2 years ago

    Beautiful poem, Cindy, and one of my favorite paintings I was lucky to see in person in Italy.

  • Lovely!😊💕💗

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    I am very disappointed I cant paint right now. As in, right now, I am disappointed I cant paint. Not that I cant paint right now. Time is not the impediment here.

  • Kenneth cruz2 years ago

    Rippling along altruistic anatomical undulations as they ignite So beautiful and I do so love alliterations and how they roll of the tongue great work!

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    I especially love that last line

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    As evocative as the painting!

  • Oooo, I learnt a new word from you today, pearlescent! Your poem was soooo stunning and I loved it so much!

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