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Insidious Scales

Sensational II Challenge

By Cindy CalderPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read

I’ve witnessed horror, seen in the embodiment of one man gone afoul

Given ear to details of unfathomable deeds framed in sadistic scowls

Tasted the acrimonious evil in but an insidious moment most foul

Whilst overwhelming grief superseded all in a mist of tears' shroud

Intertwined with the unsavory smell found in the depths of hell's bowels.

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Cindy Calder

From Charleston SC - "I am still learning." Michelangelo

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  • Test2 years ago

    Cindy this was a clever entry to the challenge!! I like both the metaphorical and genuine implications here!

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    So ominous and heavy! Great work, Cindy!

  • The Dani Writer2 years ago

    This is sensory-rich! Great writing description here. Well done!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Fantastic performance poem!!! Love it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • That was so dark and profound! Loved your poem!

  • Lana V Lynx2 years ago

    Wow! That is one powerful poem, Cindy!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Hmm. I feel this is a conversation opener. Though in reality if you sat down next to me on the train and said this I might be a little uncertain about that conversation...

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    A great take on the challenge, best of luck ☺

  • Kenneth cruz2 years ago

    Nice work

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is very good, and reminds me of someone truly evil. Very well done.

  • A true sense of evil. Well done, CIndy.

  • Gerard DiLeo2 years ago

    Yikes! That's a clear warning to steer clear. Visceral!

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    To me this reads like a summation to a court trial for either the defense of prosecutor.

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