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I broke Mother Tree
Her Blood drips down Adam’s leaves
Roots sleep to dream death.
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Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions


Comments (7)
Ooo I loved this; it made me feel sort of sad and haunted? Amazing imagery with so few lines.
Hauntingly beautiful x
Oooo, I especially loved the last line!
Phenomenal writing Melly Gold! 💕💪🏾
I like the way rhyme and alliteration are infused throughout.
Deeply touching Sis ❤️
Ohhhh this.