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Velvet Sins

Poem.

By Paul StewartPublished 15 days ago Updated 15 days ago 1 min read
Photo by Vinícius Borralho: https://www.pexels.com/photo/macro-shot-of-spider-on-human-hand-36085628/

As spiders crawl

upon your skin

Do you wince or whine

Lie awake at twilight

as spindles

Spin lacy traps

Across your window

and beyond

As spiders nest

inside openings

Nooks and crannies

Do you wish for death

Hunting as they do

for warmth

Bodily moisture offers comfort

For the weary eight-legged beast

In your nasolacrimal they rest

To find a mate

and meal they must

Your breath falters

As your heart quickens

The chimes of death

The clock strikes midnight

Long the path

To dawn

Your saviour

Crooked

And wrought with terror

What lies in wake

Then breed

between your thighs

On velvet skin

and wanting lust

Where the swollen sins

lay bare

Though you wish

To cry, to scream

Their razor legs

Approach

Your maw stays shut

Teasing twixt lips plush red

You feel the strike

As they intrude

And take you

As their host

Say farewell

To day, to night

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Aspen Marie 9 days ago

    I love the layers within this poem of yours - it’s eery, sensual, dark in its rich imagery. One of my new favourites, lovely Paul!

  • Imola Tóth12 days ago

    This is scary and magnetic in the same time. Love it! I'm not afraid of tiny spiders, but I can't stand the big, hairy ones with the "razor legs". It's kind of beautiful in a freaky way what they can do to us, in their small existence.

  • Ruth Stewart13 days ago

    Tsdr; I only heard about this poem and still had spider dreams. (Too scary, didn't read - Tsdr)

  • Grz Colm14 days ago

    I’m not sure how it’s filthy.. but I did feel yuck reading this haha. Unless there are more connotations in your upcoming story.

  • A. J. Schoenfeld14 days ago

    I really enjoyed this poem. I know I'm supposed to be shuddering in fear, but I was just enthralled with your descriptions. To be fair, I ate a spider once, on purpose. Tarantula, well just one of its legs. It tasted fine, but the little hairs felt like they were stuck in my throat for about an hour afterward. And no, I'm not afraid of spiders. I find them fascinating and have no problem "dealing" with them when they intrude in my home. When I was young it was my job to save my mother and older sister from the invading spiders, now I have to save my hubby from them.

  • Calvin London14 days ago

    Nicely done, Paul. I hate spiders. I don't trust them. One minute they are there, and then they are gone to who knows where.

  • Lamar Wiggins14 days ago

    I'm not scared of spiders, but you did such a great with the descriptions and building a sense of dread, that I just might be a tiny bit apprehensive about them now, haha.

  • Kenny Penn14 days ago

    Oh my gawd. While this was awesome, I shouldn’t have looked up nasolacrimal. The shudders are real! LOL great poem, Paul, I love it

  • Sean A.14 days ago

    Well if I didnt have arachnophobia before…

  • HATE spiders, but very nice poem

  • Tina D. Lopez15 days ago

    I can't wait for more.

  • Harper Lewis15 days ago

    ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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