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To Pick Her Dandelions

Sonnet II

By Paul Aaron DomenickPublished 12 days ago 1 min read
To Pick Her Dandelions
Photo by Matt Hoffman on Unsplash

Upon the lawn, an ersatz, golden head,

The shame of a stepmother’s gilded blade,

Where nose-breaking blooms in beds are shit-fed,

She waxed within the moonpool of my shade.

***

Lionization bit the morning bed,

With switchback fire caught from southern skies,

Her sharp-tongued roots were deep and causal red,

Like the rough rouge painted in mirrored lies.

***

And soon Narcissus must answer a ghost,

In rubber spheres of bands against my neck,

To ride winds that haunt a forgiven coast,

And find a life within diurnal wreck.

***

A thousand dandelions take flight and sow,

To bloom again wherever the breezes blow.

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About the Creator

Paul Aaron Domenick

“I am mine. Before I am ever anyone else’s.” --Nayyirah Waheed

“Publication is the auction of the mind of man.” --Emily Dickinson

“Writing is utter solitude, the descent into the cold abyss of oneself.” --Franz Kafka

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Outstanding

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  • Tiffany Gordon8 days ago

    Phenomenal writing!

  • Rain Dayze8 days ago

    Beautiful prose!

  • Marilyn Glover9 days ago

    Absolutely gorgeous writing, Paul!

  • Harper Lewis12 days ago

    This is beautiful (and it has the Pinsky touch—a sonnet without intrusive rhyme)!💖💖💖💖

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