Upon the lawn, an ersatz, golden head,
The shame of a stepmother’s gilded blade,
Where nose-breaking blooms in beds are shit-fed,
She waxed within the moonpool of my shade.
***
Lionization bit the morning bed,
With switchback fire caught from southern skies,
Her sharp-tongued roots were deep and causal red,
Like the rough rouge painted in mirrored lies.
***
And soon Narcissus must answer a ghost,
In rubber spheres of bands against my neck,
To ride winds that haunt a forgiven coast,
And find a life within diurnal wreck.
***
A thousand dandelions take flight and sow,
To bloom again wherever the breezes blow.
About the Creator
Paul Aaron Domenick
“I am mine. Before I am ever anyone else’s.” --Nayyirah Waheed
“Publication is the auction of the mind of man.” --Emily Dickinson
“Writing is utter solitude, the descent into the cold abyss of oneself.” --Franz Kafka
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Phenomenal writing!
Beautiful prose!
Absolutely gorgeous writing, Paul!
This is beautiful (and it has the Pinsky touch—a sonnet without intrusive rhyme)!💖💖💖💖