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The Well

after the bucket was lost

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 21 days ago Updated 21 days ago 1 min read

old well, no bucket

a frog jumps in anyway

the sound of water

Did you know that Matsuo Bashō (and other masters) didn't have to follow the form of a Haiku at all, it's a Haiku *because* they wrote it.

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

I’m a firm believer life is messy, beautiful, and too short, which is why I write poems full of heart and humor. I am an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. My book Beautiful and Brutal Things is on Amazon, Link 👇

https://a.co/d/537XqhW

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  • Tiffany Gordon20 days ago

    Well done!

  • Matthew J. Fromm21 days ago

    Quite the allusion to a classic here

  • Sara Wilson21 days ago

    Poor lil frog lol. And no, I did NOT know that!

  • Archery Owl 21 days ago

    🐸

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