The Vernal Jar
On ephemeral pools

The vixen noses her way to the mouth of her den, and gives a wary sniff
Her mate leads the way, their paws puncture snow
Four-clawed prints of warmth
Where the crystal-fluff melts softly to dampen dormant blades of grass
A pattering-path,
Her gait is shorter, wider, less playful than his
Though her prints are just as deep, for the added weight she bears upon her feet
Where the snow thaws it pools,
Cold as crystal and just as pure
The water is still as glass
For this puddle has not yet bloomed
She laps at the frigid waters, her tongue scrapes invisible floes of ice
And her reflection shimmers beneath the reach of the westering sun
As she drinks from the Fountain of Rebirth
Then she retreats to the warmth of her den
And her mate stands guard
As she births their pups to the world
The days grow longer,
Winter slinks away
A warm front rises from the South, it rolls in like a wave
All ice is soon defeated
Snowmelt tributaries gush like arteries
The lowlands flood
Her pups crowd at the mouth of their den
They fight for a spot
And watch the waters rise
Danger creeps closer
Closer
The brave one reaches out one wavering paw and slaps the intruding waters away
He flinches at the newness
But the vixen, she chose by good instinct,
The waters do not press beyond the brink
And when they finally recede
The family ventures out across a soggy field
In search of something clean to drink
The smells are chaos now,
For the floods have seeded the sterile Winter Pool with signs of life again!
With a million eggs
And a billion spores
Among the silt
Of cyclops
Of daphnia
Of copepods
Of hydra
And amoebae
Of bacteria and algae
The foxes splash the glittering sun-drenched waters
But
The scent lingers on the nose, so they wander on
To search out waters that run pure
They leave the vernal pool
By dusk, singing frogs have hopped over
For a place to breed and spawn
And like magic, by the coming dawn the pool is ringed with jelly!
The birds bring duckweed and fish eggs
Then the dragon flies come to lay
And their nymphs begin to prey— on tadpoles and larval fry and tinier bugs
The little magic puddle froths and teems,
A microcosmic sea with creatures unknown to land
The kraken and leviathan wage their wars between wet grains of sand
And when the ephemeral ocean dries and the mud begins to crack
The rains will fall upon the dust
And the petrichor shall call the sniffing vixen back
***
Authors note:
A while back I found hundreds of baby fish drying in a puddle on a park road. I transferred as many as I could to the creek.
This poem is about the cyclic ordered chaos of water, warmth, and life in seasonal wetlands: how all three return each spring :)
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Sam Spinelli
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Comments (6)
The imagery is stunning, the description...it felt like you not only told the story but created the creatures and nature surrounding them ...it felt so real..it obviously is...you are what you've done? This was brilliant!
Such a beautiful poem - love the imagery: The kraken and leviathan wage their wars between wet grains of sand And when the ephemeral ocean dries and the mud begins to crack
Well I’m going to disagree - I thought this was beautiful. Firstly I love foxes, but the images and language in this were gorgeous. And well done on rescuing the fish. You’re a good bloke.
Beautifully expressed and written :)
I'm shocked that you're not pleased with this. I feel it's excellent! I especially loved the puddle that hasn't bloomed yet. That was both beautiful and clever. I'm so happy you decided help those baby fish 🥹❤️
Definitely not pleased with the final product here, but I can’t figure out exactly why. Anyway I’m tired of trying to tweak it. I think the rhythm feels off, and I guess I’m having trouble conveying the sense of mystery and awe that I feel when I look at the microscopic world of puddles. Anyway, as always, wide open to criticism. How could I have fixed or improved this poem?