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Sleep undone again

Chillingly

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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Midnight awaken

Warm room sudden chill descend

Cold breath ear caress

Haiku

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Raymond G. Taylor

Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Edward Swafford5 days ago

    Now this is a Haiku.

  • Sara Wilson5 days ago

    Love it! Super creepy 🖤

  • Julie Lacksonen5 days ago

    Creepy! I had to read it twice. I was about to ask you what an "ear carcass" is! 😂 So glad I read that right the second time! 💜

  • C. Rommial Butler5 months ago

    Well-wrought! That moment between dream and waking, did the voice come from my mind... or the room?

  • 😳☠️

  • Lamar Wiggins6 months ago

    Nicely executed, Ray! I felt the unease.

  • Sandy Gillman6 months ago

    Such an eerie little snapshot in just three lines. I can almost feel the chill.

  • Aarish6 months ago

    This haiku captures a chilling moment with minimalist precision. The contrast between warmth and sudden cold perfectly evokes that eerie, half-awake feeling.

  • I will just die if that happens to me, lol. Loved this!

  • Lana V Lynx6 months ago

    I hope it’s not a ghost. Great haiku, Raymond!

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