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Go To Bed

Haiku of Now Challenge

By Rain DayzePublished 20 days ago 1 min read
Go To Bed
Photo by Anthony Tran on Unsplash

Staring at your phone endlessly

Don't you realize the damage you're causing?

Turn it off and go to bed.

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Rain Dayze

Aspiring writer with a passion for spice, pets, and coffee. I've published through here before under a different name, but it's still me! I've got an alternative site for content: https://www.inkitt.com/angela5347

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  • Paul Aaron Domenick7 days ago

    Haha. Yes.

  • Cryptic Edwards9 days ago

    Love it this is how I feel with my work pad turn it off stop writtng, stop reading go to bed 😂😂💜

  • Julie Lacksonen11 days ago

    Good one! This is why I leave my phone in another room. 💜

  • ❤️Right ✅️ lol 😆

  • S. A. Crawford15 days ago

    God I didn't need to be called out like this 😂 I'm a chronic doom scroller!

  • Good advice, we all do that

  • Tiffany Gordon18 days ago

    Nicely done!

  • Rain, in response to your comment on my Haiku challenge... Haiku's are 5,7,5 syllables, not 5,7,5 words. They are usually written about love or nature and because it's about now, I found that hard to do.

  • Sandy Gillman20 days ago

    I love this message! I need to remind myself of this later tonight.

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