I’m currently swinging in a rainbow knitted hammock that’s hugging all parts of my body as I gripped it with my fists.
The boisterous winds from the hurricane flung me left to right, as they screamed deep woes in my presence.
The scent of the misty rain grew potent, like the tang of a sneeze that sprinkled over me.
Dirt speckles stung my eyes, as I tried to see it, the storm in its wild face.
Realizing my human senses collided with God when I licked my lips and the ocean spray of sea salt and cool spring kissed me back.
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Natasha Collazo
Selected Writer in Residency, Champagne France ---2026
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By Natasha CollazoExclusive • 2 years ago
The Cave Part 11
Darkness, and the countless points of light, as if the entire void beyond was filled with the fire of a million stars. I felt as if I was staring into the eternity of a night sky beyond those wooden doors, the place beyond the actual reality, while I stood behind a curtain of scenery, the mountain and sky a mere pretense. And in that void beyond of unfathomable space, there hung suspended a mighty shard of crystal floating in place, with hundreds of a far smaller chunks orbiting around it in balanced but intersecting circles, no two in the same path. These caught the light from the center, and sparkled with inner fire each.
By Jamye Sharpabout 20 hours ago in Chapters
Comments (8)
love your poem
That last line...
great job! Loved how you and God kissed :)
In clearly in the wrong mood for this, just keep thinking "are you safe?"
Ah that last line, that's what bliss is! You perfectly captured all the senses! I loved your poem!
Lovely salty sensory. I was hoping to read some sea senses so thanks for providing
So gorgeous! Go gurl!
Nice work. Watch your 'a a'!