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Father, Hello

For Paul and John's 47-Words Short Story Unofficial Challenge

By Paul Aaron DomenickPublished 9 days ago Updated 9 days ago 1 min read
Father, Hello
Photo by Andrik Langfield on Unsplash

Father, hello.

But I was remiss to understand--

for decades after your surmise--

A gay son?

What kind of man are you?

I will never meet you again,

the sun, it spits.

Turn this poem around for me--

all I know

is a fan above me whirring.

Family

About the Creator

Paul Aaron Domenick

“I am mine. Before I am ever anyone else’s.” --Nayyirah Waheed

“Publication is the auction of the mind of man.” --Emily Dickinson

“Writing is utter solitude, the descent into the cold abyss of oneself.” --Franz Kafka

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  • Paul Stewart9 days ago

    Wow. I'm impressed at how much emotion you fitted into this. Tremendous entry. Thank you for taking part in the fun!

  • Everyone should have the acceptance of his/her parents, no matter what.

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