Crushing on Myself
Kiss The Mirror π
CRUSHING ON MYSELF
I Love everything that I doβ¦
All of me loves,
All of you,
And, I am talking about meβ¦
I surf amongst the big waves
Often times declining,
But steadily rising,
Illogical about associationsβ¦
I protect my energy by inquiring about Higher Vibrationsβ¦
I call for Myself, to be Healed,
From Despair, Confusion,
And they've witnessed
My Messβ¦
I rise from the pangs,
Of No Love only Temptationsβ¦
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Wonderful :)
love how you use waves as a metaphor
You keep on surfing those big waves!! R I S E𫢠𫢠𫢠I surf amongst the big waves, Often times declining But steadily rising. Illogical about associations⦠I protect my energy by inquiring about Higher Vibrations⦠I call for Myself, to be Healed,
The big waves declining and rising- I love this metaphor. It makes so much sense to me.
Such experiences are opportunities to increase our level of discernment. *Me with both hands raised* I won't shut off my heart, but B.S. detector registers in nanoseconds. Keep writing and sharing!
Strong energy in this piece. It reads like a reminder you wrote for yourself and shared with the rest of us.
"I protect my energy by inquiring about Higher Vibrationsβ¦" I love this line!π
Get it HL! Fantastic work! π«ΆπΎππͺπΎ
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