Explanation
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"Look, Christine," Bethan began. "I don't know it all but I'll tell you what I do know, okay? And this is all from my perspective so I may be missing some things or taking leaps here. But here goes.'
Christine was pacing. A memory sprang into Bethan's head of a wolf in an enclosure, patrolling, looking for a way out of the situation in which it found itself. She remembered feeling sorry for it and that's how she felt now. Dave had done the dirty on them both, from what she could gather but Bethan had said goodbye to him, had a chance to live (if you could call it that) without him. Her feelings were not so tied up in him. The man was a louse but he wasn't her louse anymore. However, for Christine, today was turning out to be one traumatic episode after another.
Bethan wondered whether it was a good idea to tell her. Was there a better time? And then realised that no, this was how it was going to have to be. She took a deep breath, swallowed the pain she still had in her throat.
"Dave was my husband. We're divorced. We had a daughter, Laney."
Christine looked sharply at Bethan when she said this.
"She went missing some years back and was never found." Bethan paused, swallowed.
"I knew that Dave had moved on. I knew that he had another wife. I didn't know that he had another daughter until recently and I'll expand on that in a minute." Bethan wasn't sure how Christine would take the fact that she knew her daughter, had been in her house! God, how would I feel? Bethan focused on the background. "But I think, although I don't know this for sure and perhaps you'll be able to shed some light on this, that he was with you long before, perhaps even while he was with me and the fact that he wanted to meet up today means that he's scared, not about that maybe but about something..."
Bethan trailed off.
Christine paced still, back and forth.
"I think it's linked to the photos. And the camera."
Finally, Christine stopped.
"What photos?"
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Ethan never believed in love at first sight. He believed in routine. Every morning at 7:30, he walked into the same coffee shop in downtown Chicago, ordered a medium black coffee, and sat by the window with his laptop. His life was predictable, quiet, and safe. Until she walked in. Her name was Lily. It was a cold fall morning when Ethan first saw her. Leaves were blowing across the street, and the sky looked gray and heavy. Lily stepped into the café, brushing her hair back and smiling like she carried her own sunshine. She looked around, searching for a seat. The place was full. Except for the chair across from Ethan. “Hey, is this seat free?” she asked. Ethan looked up, slightly startled. “Yeah… go ahead.” That was it. No music, no dramatic moment—just a simple question. But somehow, everything changed after that. At first, they didn’t talk much. Just polite smiles. A quick “good morning.” But over time, small talk turned into real conversations. 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What if he lost her completely? So instead of speaking, he started writing. Every night, he opened a blank document on his laptop and typed letters to Lily. He wrote about how her laugh made his stressful days easier. How her presence made the noisy world feel calm. How she had quietly become the best part of his life. But he never showed her. Not once. Then one evening, everything shifted. “I got some news,” Lily said, stirring her coffee slowly. Ethan looked up. “Good news or bad news?” She smiled—but it didn’t reach her eyes. “I’m moving to California. New job. It’s… a big opportunity.” Ethan felt his chest tighten. “When?” he asked. “Next week.” Next week. Seven days. That’s all he had left. He wanted to say it right then. Don’t go. Or take me with you. Or at least know that I love you. But instead, he nodded. “That’s amazing. I’m happy for you.” Lily looked at him carefully, like she was searching for something deeper. But Ethan stayed quiet. The last day came faster than he expected. They sat across from each other, both unusually silent. “I guess this is it,” Lily said softly. “Yeah,” Ethan replied. There was so much he wanted to say, but the words felt stuck somewhere between his heart and his voice. “Take care, Ethan.” “You too, Lily.” She stood up, hesitated for a moment… then walked out. And just like that, she was gone. Ethan sat there long after she left, staring at the empty chair. That night, he gathered every letter he had written. Dozens of pages. All the words he never said. He printed them, tied them together, and left them at the coffee shop the next morning. “If she ever comes back… give this to her,” he told the barista. Time moved on. Weeks turned into months. The seasons changed. Lily never came back. Until one year later. It was another cold morning when the café door opened, and Ethan looked up out of habit. His heart skipped. It was her. 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Comments (10)
The comparison of Christine to a caged wolf was a striking one! Well penned, Rachel!
I feel so sorry for both of them… neither are at fault.😳
I'd really hate to be Christine right now 😅😅
Gosh poor Christine. This will be a day she won't forget in a while.
Rd - No 'Explanation' necessary as to how you may fill your time slot re; One~Month~Mo. You could-probably see if your stove is still in working order to get your family offa micro mac and cheese. Or, go for a shop @ your favorite Sally Thrift store for a less threadbare house coat. And, maybe even leave a little writing space for others. Just chatter-back teasing; or am I? Your J-Bud
Evidence??? Now we are getting somewhere
I’m on edge too. Good Lord!
Just lob him in the quarry. No one'll notice!
Keeping me on edge with this, Rachel. Such a rollercoaster of emotions!
Okay. That much is out. I curious for Christine's reaction when she hears the whole truth.